good imagination there are lot's of ideas in it. only some of the straight lines seemed a bit out of their way. when you are working with geometric srictness like in the two patterns, it would be better to keep the lines accurate. keep it up!
thanks for the comment, i agree that the rigid grids do conflict with the flow of the wires and lines, especially the one juxtaposed behind the tree. I'll keep it in mind if I ever reattempt this sort of thing.
I don't mean to sell out my art to you but if you're interested check out the other drawing I did of a tree. It is just a line contour of the tree and surrounding rocks and landscape, I think it improves a little on this but it still has some of the same problems
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